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Zara West
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Hi Zara, I feel like I might have missed a chapter…. Anyway, here’s some suggestions.

Thanks for the feedback, Connie. This is the chapter following the one you read last. Do you think that is unclear or did you figure out by the third paragraph she’d come back to Jax for her family and gotten captured? I think I might need to move that paragraph up. Zara

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