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Zara West
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Here is my take on Chapter 9. As far as I know the speech was pretty much the same as now in the late 1880s so consider maybe having her wearing an old-fashion hairstyle instead. Also consider writing this in past tense. I am not sure present works for your story. See my comment at the end.

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