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Connie Bretes
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Hey all, it sure is quiet here in the critique forum. Hope that means everyone is busy writing.  Anyway, here’s chapter 11. All comments welcome. Still struggling with presence tense. I like how it sounds, but I’m so used to writing past tense that my eyes are not seeing the words that need to be changed.

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