Hi! Thank you so much for the feedack! I have really struggled with Hannah. How is this for her resolution sentence: Hannah realizes that she won’t lose her independence if she allows herself to care about someone.
Hi Le Anne
You are most welcome.:) And this is sounding much better – Hannah now seems a more independent person with perception.
Now it is up to you to convey that growth and transformation within the story using the external plot situations to bring about opportunities for awareness for H&Z. And how are you going to tell this in a synopsis?