Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions November 24, 2018 at 11:03 am #28479 Zara WestParticipant I am trying to write a sweet Christmas short story. Here is the beginning. Any thoughts? Comments? All feedback welcome. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.