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Zara West
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Here is the end of my Christmas story. Time is tight so it’s a little longer than I usually send. I started this last year, and it has taken me forever to finish it. I wrote at least ten versions.  I would love to send it out to my newsletter subscribers this year if you all think it is worthy.  I would appreciate any feedback especially on the ending – is it emotional enough?

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