Reply To: Ana Morgan submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Ana Morgan submissions › Reply To: Ana Morgan submissions January 10, 2019 at 12:07 pm #29232 Connie BretesParticipant Hi Ana, great chapter. I haven’t been following it from the beginning, but I was able to pick it up. I only found a couple of things. Hope it helps. Connie Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.