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Connie Bretes
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Thanks Zara, for your suggestions for creating a Boston flair. The characters are actually located in the suburbs of Cambridge, which is where MIT is located. I’ll go through and see if I can add more of some of the details to give it an eastern flair.

Also wanted to ask you something about room assignments. The Math building at MIT was recently renovated. You don’t think they would then assign floors and rooms according to senior tenure professors then the less senior professors scramble for what ever rooms are available and assign them to floors for more efficiency? I was thinking that they would upgrade this and make it more efficient for the professors and students at the time of the renovations.

Here is Chapter 18 for everyone to review. It gets spooky. At least, I’d like it to get spooky, so any help with that would be appreciated.

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