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Zara West
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This the end of Under the Skin. I am submitting both chapters as I am in a time crunch. Crit as much as you want to. But I am particularly concerned about the ending, and I need to get this back to my editor by Tuesday at the latest. Those of you who have read most of the story -do you think it ends emotionally enough and on the right note?

Zara

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