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Jennette Fox
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Not sure about the “sorry” part. Love everything else. How about:

“As for Jana, her heart might’ve been in the right place, but she chose the wrong tactics.”

As for editing software, I use Grammarly. If I remember correctly, I think I got a deal of pro writing aid, but haven’t tried it yet.

Jenn

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