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Connie Bretes
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Hi Zara, I forgot about what happened to Mic. You can’t have any worst of a black moment when you’re in the sewer.  Ugh.

Your change above, having Wheeler arrested by Jana’s flashdrive is good.

I have a lifetime membership with ProWritingAid. I sometimes forget to use it, but it is a good software.

Connie

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