Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions February 4, 2019 at 12:51 pm #29630 Jennette FoxParticipant Zara, I hope you saw my crit of your first chapter. And I hope these suggestions are helpful. There weren’t many. Nice job. Jenn Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.