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Thanks, Ana! I appreciate the feedback and the good catches.  It’s amazing how many eyes can have been on something and still there are typos to be found. Btw, that was the whole story. I’ve been getting criticism that it’s boring and there is “no point” so if you have any feedback on that, I’d love it (it seemed like you expected more, but it was just supposed to be a lighthearted, sweet short story to introduce a new character into the story world and have it be about Lizzy and Darcy. But if you had something or somewhere you expected it to go for it to feel complete, I’d be grateful to know). Many thanks again! Reina

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