Attached are my comments. I tend to make a lot of them, but just so there is no doubt, I am very impressed with this SUB.
I had just started to critique your first submission but saw that you were setting it aside. I’m attached the comments I made on that one too, in case you decide to pick it back up one day.
On a more solemn note, I am very sorry to hear about the loss of your mother. I’m sure your world looks a whole lot bleaker without her:(
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