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Zara West

Thanks for the feedback Ana,

Glad you are enjoying so far. I am at the next to last chapter and Black Moment and really struggling to get it right.

I changed the ending. Is this better?

Everyone will come to hear me speak about the war. And I don’t care one pinched penny if all my Quaker ancestors roll over in their graves. But how will I tell Marmee her favorite daughter supports the shedding of blood?


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