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Jennette Fox
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You’re right, Zara, about ‘Twould. And it sounds like you’ve removed the mention of George Fox from the ending. If he’s mentioned (and maybe he was earlier), I think a little info or context would be good. A lot of readers may know George Fox is, but the only one I know is my husband’s uncle.

Great story!

Jenn

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