Reply To: Connie Bretes Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Connie Bretes Submissions › Reply To: Connie Bretes Submissions March 10, 2019 at 3:04 pm #30656 Zara WestParticipant Here is my feedback on CH 1 and CH 2. Hope it is helpful. Zara Attachments: CRIT-by-Zara-Connie-Desert-Love-ch-1.docx CRIT-by-Zara-Connie-Desert-Love-ch-2.docx
