Reply To: Ana Morgan submissions

Home Forums Critique Forum Ana Morgan submissions Reply To: Ana Morgan submissions

#30923
Zara West
Participant

Hi Anna,

 

Here are my Crits. I critiqued Ch 17 before, and I see that you made many improvements. Only one comment there. Ch 18 flows well. Made some suggestions. Use what works for you. Zara

Attachments:
X

Forgot Password?

Join Us