Reply To: Ana Morgan submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Ana Morgan submissions › Reply To: Ana Morgan submissions March 21, 2019 at 9:52 am #30923 Zara WestParticipant Hi Anna, Here are my Crits. I critiqued Ch 17 before, and I see that you made many improvements. Only one comment there. Ch 18 flows well. Made some suggestions. Use what works for you. Zara Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.