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Ana Morgan
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Here’s my crit for this excellent chapter,  Zara. Hopefully you will find something useful!

My editor uses the Chicago style guide. Comma after the second clause in a set of three and all. Comma after introductory But or So. Comma after first adjective in set of two… sigh.

Ana

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