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Ana Morgan
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Question I thought of upon waking this morning, Zara. In Ch 23, she has oodles of money, fine house, lovely clothes. She sent money to Violette (and longed for) ┬áin earlier chapter. But she doesn’t mention her in ch 23, if I recall correctly. Maybe a mention would be good.

Ah ha, in ch 24, Violette is mentioned.

The scene with Clara Barton is useful.

Ana

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