The ending ties everything up wonderfully, Zara. I love your author notes at the end—reminding me that this is a fictionalized biography was a perfect thing to do.
I wish you all the best in getting this published. It would make a great film.
p.s. I have improved my ch 19 based on other crit partners’ feedback. When you are ready to read, I will post the improved version.
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