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Zara West
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Thanks again for the quick return and the positive comment about the ending.

I had just finished the chapter 19 you had posted. The medical detail was handled adeptly while maintain close POV and conflict. However, it doesn’t  show anything about Galen and his baseball career? If you have another version post it and I look it over too.

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