Thank you again, Ana and Reina for being so dedicated in reading to the very end of my manuscript. I have made all the suggested changes, and I know the story is much better because of your input. Next time you have a manuscript, I promise to do a similar critique for you.
I will say that using Prowriting and Autocrit, did help tremendously. But there were still plenty of small errors that only human eyes can find and suggestions only a reader could make.
I am so very grateful for your help, Zara