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Leslie Scott

Oh,  love that.


So, since she has a reason for being named (to mark her as important to the reader), we need to remember that we’re in HIS POV, and thus he’d have no reason to know her name. She has to either tell him or he has to read it somewhere (usually cabbies have their license taped up front and visible. By him knowing something he can’t know (her name) unless told, we’ve delved into head hopping and “fly on the wall” telling.

Make sense?


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