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Ana Morgan
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Hi All,

Here is chapter 20 of Ammi Folkright (contemporary suspense.) I’m pretty sure I did not format the reading of her father’s sketchbook correctly, so help with that, please. More importantly, does the chapter flow? Lots of reveals here, but I hope I’ve ended with more questions than answers—as in how will it be possible to prove their speculations and free her dad from prison. TIA,  Ana

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