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Hi Zara,

Hopefully, I’m doing this right!  This is my first critique.  I wasn’t sure what you were looking to have critiqued exactly so I have several comments throughout the piece.  I love it!  Well written and flowed easily.  I got a great sense of the father and daughter.  Please let me know if you have any questions about my comments.

Dana

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