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Ana Morgan
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Loved this, Zara. Made some picky suggestions.

You introduced Cat very well. I like her a lot. She glimpsed the hero’s daughter well enough to recognize her-and the truck– again. She doesn’t seem like a threat. Is fish farm pollution caused by concentrations of fish poop—ie, nitrogen and phosphorus?

Ana

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