Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions April 28, 2019 at 2:29 pm #31544 Cathy McDavidParticipant Zara, Here’s my critique of your chapter three. Hope it’s not too late. Good job as always. Take or leave my comments as you see fit! Cathy Mc Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.