Reply To: Kevin Ryan submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Kevin Ryan submissions › Reply To: Kevin Ryan submissions May 7, 2019 at 6:59 pm #31709 Jennette FoxParticipant Kevin, Attached are my comments and suggestions. I hope they are helpful. Best of luck with the contest. I’ve entered a few and learned a great deal from the judges comments. Jenn Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.