I apologize for not getting to everyone’s submissions. Been a busy week. I will do those tomorrow.
Those of you who critiqued Take the World (now renamed Outspoken), I want to thank you so much. I rewrote the ending as suggested. My agent loved it. So it is now on the way to find a publisher. Fingers crossed.
Here is Chapter 4 of Hooked. All feedback deeply appreciated. Zara