Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions May 9, 2019 at 5:26 pm #31748 Jennette FoxParticipant Congratulations, Zara, on Outspoken. I hope your agent finds a home for it soon. Attached are my comments and suggestion. Loved Cat’s interaction with the little girl. Great chapter. Jenn Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.