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Cathy McDavid
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Jenn,

Here’s my critique of chapters 25-27. Sorry to be so late with them, had just a crazy busy two weeks.

In case you’re wondering, the blue highlighted words are ones I noticed were repetitive :)) Please take my comments or discard as you wish!

Cathy Mc

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