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Ana Morgan
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Hi! After working up a detailed outline of the ending chapters of Ammi Folkright and rereading the requesting agent’s contest comments, I reworked chapter 20—especially the end. The agent hopes the romance will be as strong as the suspense plot, so I decided the lovers needed a black moment break-up.  Is it believable?

TIA, Ana

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