Reply To: Jenn Fox Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Jenn Fox Submissions › Reply To: Jenn Fox Submissions June 6, 2019 at 8:38 pm #32128 Zara WestParticipant Hi Jenn, Sorry to take so long. Here are a few comments. Reads well. You have really created a believable teenager. Zara Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.