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Ana Morgan
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Great chapter, Zara. I think the discussion about sea cucumbers was just right. Cat’s an adult unfamiliar to talking to a child, and the child is quite grown-up, as she is around mainly adults.

Made a few suggestions for consideration.

Ana

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