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Ana Morgan
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Great scenes, Jenn!

Macy’s a-ha about caring for an infant is growth. The reveal about Kate’s fear of a child passenger in her car is super. You might want to add just a bit to show Ben relenting after being miffed with Kate outside the pizza place.

Ana

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