Whew. Finally got in. I have been in Internet hell these last few days. We have very rural Internet – and with the building of several new houses around us, I think the tower can’t handle the draw. Frustrating. I ended up emailing Jen her crit as I happened to have her email.
Also waving hi to Evelyn. Glad to have you back. Can’t wait to read your next story.
Anyway, I made it in after 25 minutes of waiting for the site to load. (Maybe my new neighbors sleep in on Sunday?)
So happily, here is Chapter 11 of Hooked. All feedback appreciated. Zara