Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions July 15, 2019 at 8:41 am #32577 Jennette FoxParticipant Great, sub, Zara. I especially love the interaction between Cat and Ellie. I made some suggestions that you can take or leave. I’m looking forward to chapter 12. Jenn Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.