Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions August 6, 2019 at 8:09 am #32843 Ana MorganParticipant Sorry to take so long to do this crit, Zara. I was ill for several days last week and am just getting caught up. Good chapter again! Several suggestions. Ana Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.