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Jennette Fox
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Another great chapter, Zara. I made several small suggestions to consider.

I’m sorry to hear about your frustrating technical challenges.

And thank you for your critique of my latest sub. Very helpful. I look forward to getting back into the swing of things after a few weeks spent with my husband’s family, including a jaunt to Mackinac Island.

Jenn

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