Reply To: Lisa Kerr submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Lisa Kerr submissions › Reply To: Lisa Kerr submissions August 15, 2019 at 12:00 am #33070 Olivia AndrewsParticipant Hello, I have two chapters I would like to get a critique on, mostly for big picture edits. Are there any major areas of concern? Lingering questions? Etc. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.