Reply To: Lisa Kerr submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Lisa Kerr submissions › Reply To: Lisa Kerr submissions August 15, 2019 at 8:30 am #33077 Ana MorganParticipant Hi Lisa, Here is my crit of your two chapters. I love how you wrote Cole. I am not sure about Sam. The reason she’s fired seems shaky. Ana Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.