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Olivia Andrews
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Hi Lisa,

Here is my crit of your two chapters. I love how you wrote Cole. I am not sure about Sam. The reason she’s fired seems shaky.

Ana

Thanks, Ana. I can see it being shaky. I had more development there and edited it out.

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