Reply To: Lisa Kerr submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Lisa Kerr submissions › Reply To: Lisa Kerr submissions August 15, 2019 at 10:23 am #33085 Olivia AndrewsParticipant Ana Morgan wrote: Hi Lisa, Here is my crit of your two chapters. I love how you wrote Cole. I am not sure about Sam. The reason she’s fired seems shaky. Ana Thanks, Ana. I can see it being shaky. I had more development there and edited it out.