Olivia, your outline sounds right up the Hallmark movie alley. It reminds me of those movies a lot, with the growing closer and a kiss as the final moment. It felt like a lot of subplots, but they all tied together nicely with the whole ‘small town’ feel of the story. I write sweet romance too and I would read it. Good luck.
A Little Sweet. A Little Sexy. A Lot Happily Ever After.