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Olivia Andrews
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Jenn, I’m going to post this alternative chapter for everyone, but will attach it here. Should I completely toss out Sam’s firing and work with this chapter (which also needs some work)? I’m in the first draft of this story first, so that’s why it’s so shaky.

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