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Olivia Andrews
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I am nearly finished with revisions on the first chapter. I wanted to thank each of you for your notes. I appreciated the thorough nature of each one. Your suggestions really helped me think through my language choices. I am already so proud of this chapter. Thank you all!

Questions for this rewrite: Does Sam’s firing seem more plausible? Does her anticipation of the proposal seem clear?

Ch. 1 Rewrite – Arranged with Love

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