Reply To: Jenn Fox Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Jenn Fox Submissions › Reply To: Jenn Fox Submissions August 24, 2019 at 5:41 pm #33343 Lisa CoughlinParticipant Hi, Jenn Just my take. You’ve done a lot of work on this since I last read it. It’s wonderful. Just a few suggestions for you. Take or leave as you will. Take care, Lisa C. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.