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Ana Morgan
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Kim, I think this chapter is very suspenseful. It is not “listy.”

I made some suggestions and corrected a few places where commas are misplaced. (Don’t worry! You’re not the only loop member who misplaces commas.  Just ask Evelyn.)

Ana

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