Reply To: Lisa Kerr submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Lisa Kerr submissions › Reply To: Lisa Kerr submissions August 26, 2019 at 7:32 pm #33432 Jessica JayneParticipant Great start Lisa. Like Ana, I love the plot twist. Offered up some suggestions. Take what you want. 🙂 Jessica Jayne Sexy Stories with Heart FTHRW Secretary Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.