Reply To: Jessica Jayne submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Jessica Jayne submissions › Reply To: Jessica Jayne submissions August 27, 2019 at 10:03 pm #33471 Carla WardParticipant Hi Jessica, I’m new to the forums. I enjoyed your prologue. I am attaching a .pdf with comments in the margins. If you have trouble with the file let me know and I’ll try a different format. Nice work! Carla Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.